Post by Silikiyu on May 20, 2017 20:54:47 GMT -5
Please mind your writing style! While detailed posts are great, please try to keep in mind that taking five paragraphs to describe how you are posed or how a tree that has no impact on your post looks is considered filler, or necessary detail. You can easily say "An upward diagonal swing" as opposed to describing how each muscle twists for one motion. With that being said, please also try to avoid 'one liner' posts if possible. A single paragraph is best if you cannot for any reason find more to post.
IN EXAMPLE;
She sighed and sat down on the couch, "Yeah, I guess you're right"
(is a one liner, that is fine for casual in-home roleplay if the home owner approves of such, but in open world we would prefer; )
Jane Doe breathed a heavy sigh, turning from John and taking a seat on the couch. "Yeah..." She grumble, looking away as she admit his point, "I guess you're right." Her words were blunt with disappointment, having preferred her idea to his.
(Notice how there's a bit more life there? We WANT to see your character as more than a piece of cardboard!)
Now you may notice this forum allows BBCode, please DO NOT go overboard with decorations and flair as it is more distracting than anything.
IN EXAMPLE;
She sighed and sat down on the couch, "Yeah, I guess you're right"
(is a one liner, that is fine for casual in-home roleplay if the home owner approves of such, but in open world we would prefer; )
Jane Doe breathed a heavy sigh, turning from John and taking a seat on the couch. "Yeah..." She grumble, looking away as she admit his point, "I guess you're right." Her words were blunt with disappointment, having preferred her idea to his.
(Notice how there's a bit more life there? We WANT to see your character as more than a piece of cardboard!)
Now you may notice this forum allows BBCode, please DO NOT go overboard with decorations and flair as it is more distracting than anything.